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Rashika, The Book Owl

So my name is Rashika and I am weird. I read a lot (duh) and I watch a lot of TV. I also like to review. Check out my blog (where I co-blog with awesome people).

The world building needs some work but otherwise good book

A Murder of Mages: A Novel of the Maradaine Constabulary - Marshall Ryan Maresca

***This review has also been posted on The Social Potato

It’s always so refreshing to read a fantasy novel after not having read one in a while, and this one came with the added advantage of also being a mystery, so it was a book set out to win my heart. The sad thing is that I ended up not falling head over heels for the book even though I had lots of fun reading it.  I felt like there was a spark missing that prevented me from feeling right at home with the novel.

This review is going to take on a slightly different format then my previous ones (NO I AM NOT BEING LAZY) in that I am going to divide it into three distinct parts: The world building, the characters and the plot. Those are the things that I found to be the most important in the novel (and usually most other novels) and want to focus solely on those aspects instead of other little things.

The World Building


World building, in my opinion, is one of the most important things in a fantasy novel but the world building in this novel wasn't all that great. It was there, and there were details, but there were only minimal details. Details that would make sure we understood the story but not much else. I don’t like being left in the dark about fantastical elements which is why it was kind of a big disappointment that this book didn’t go into as many details. We’re told there had been wars, we are told about mage circles and about mages themselves but I am left with so many questions. Like what was the war about? Who was the fight against? What are the other regions surrounding the setting of the book? Are mages the only supernatural creatures in the world? What’s the government like? There were so many aspects to the world that weren't explored and that made it harder for me to really feel at home in the world. I think, the lack of focus on the world building could be the result of the fact that this book is primarily a mystery, but it is set in a fantastical world that is clearly different from our world which is why I felt that the world needed to be established a little more.

The Plot


This brings me to the plot. I think the mystery elements were a lot better done in the novel as opposed to the fantastical elements and that doesn’t come as a surprise. I think the plot was pretty solid except for that moment when the identity of the murderer was actually revealed. Do you ever have those moments when reading a mystery when you’re expecting a turn that will just swoop you off your foot and make you go “OMG, THAT MAKES SO MUCH SENSE” and instead you get a firecracker that didn’t go off right? That was my reaction to the identity of the murderer. The murderer wasn’t predictable at all and not in a good way. That said, the pacing in the novel was great and I was never bored. I think the author put a lot of detail into developing the investigation itself and that paid off because it was very believable but also really exciting. A little bit of foreshadowing, I think could have helped but that’s just me as a reader.  I like being surprised but I also like it when there are legitimate clues to pick up on that can help you guess the identity of a killer with some accuracy.

The Characters


The characters in the novel are clearly the highlight. I actually went into the book thinking there might be a romance between the two main character but I turned out to be wrong. There is no romance between the two characters and NO romantic tension. I guess I am just so used to expecting romance in a lot of what I read that I am surprised when there isn't one.

Satrine and Minox have a fantastic dynamic and it all comes from the fact that they are very intelligent and observant investigators that work well together. They read each other well and have each other’s backs and I LOVE that sort of dynamic between partners (it doesn’t always have to be romantic). I also just love the two as individuals.

Satrine had a rough upbringing and after a stunt in the Druth Intelligence, she managed to find a nice HEA which was disrupted when her husband was beaten within an inch of his life. Now, she has to go out and find a way to earn money to support her family. It’s easy to root for her especially since she can be so witty and SO BADASS.

Minox is also really charming in the way he never outwardly expresses his feelings but you know they are there. I also love how intelligent he is and how determined he is to bring justice and make sure cases are solved to his satisfaction.

This novel, on the whole, while not up to standards in some departments also featured some diversity but also a lot more females than can usually be found in this genre (females who work and females who go to school and university!!!) which already gives it more plus points in my opinion.

This is not a perfect read but one that is still very enjoyable and I can only hope that the following books in the series will get better and win me over completely!

NOTE: Half way through writing this review I just realized that there is another series set in the same world and the first book just came out this year… I GUESS I HAVE SOME READING TO DO.

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